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Senryu 1, 2, 3

1)
loneliness
envelopes my heart ~
weight of teardrops

2)
forgotten
in the grand scheme of things ~
soul mates

3)
don't cry ~
I'll be alright
waiting in line

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 9:58:00 AM

    Really like senryu 2.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:37:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:09:00 PM

    Beautiful, this is so beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 1:51:00 PM

    ‡ I Love Red Rain Hearts, Sweet Salty Teardrops, Divinities, SoulMates. Stirring To The Core This Beauty I Find, Sweet Beautiful Catie. Although I Spot A Bit In Gray I Know, That Glowing Is The Love That Paves Your Beautiful Path. Thank You Catie, For The Kindness As The Joy Of Your Visit! 'Happy Thanksgiving To You Too.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Outstanding! I can't choose one fav... Three beauties, Catie!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:08:00 PM

    Great set of sensitive senryu dear Catie:) And its so lovely to see you here again! Thanks for your wonderful comment my friend:) Hugs and Love~Arild

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/17/2012 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Arild. these are 'sad sack senryu.' HA! hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Nice senryu, Catie! Well done. Love, KIm

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/17/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Kim, so nice to see you. hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 1:42:00 PM

    I really like these, Catie dear!! Where are all your poems? You are pulling a "frank" on us, deleting stuff like that!!! haha

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/17/2012 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Actually, I am just coming back and do not wish to post older poems. I tried that life expectancy thing, says that I'll live to be 83. hmmm... hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:20:00 PM

    I like these Catie! They have a lil sassy incorporated in them! I took a stab at some Haiku's, don't know of the cut word is cutting, syllables and moras are different, etc.

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/17/2012 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Marlon. :) hugs, catie