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Dear God, honestly





                                                     Dear God, honestly
                                    our inner divine deserves only a small "g"
                        we need to open our eyes and do something about it
                                             honestly, before it's too late......











Laila Andresen Mjelde 17.11.2012

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  1. DeBole Avatar
    Gail DeBole
    Date: 5/4/2013 7:18:00 PM
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    Laila - This one has me thinking. Like your use of the small "g". We all need to aspire to a higher standard. - Gail
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    David Williams
    Date: 1/14/2013 12:13:00 PM
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    Laila like this a lot...David
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 1/4/2013 12:28:00 PM
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    Hi Laila nice to find this write enjoyed, happy new year to you, all the best Owen
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    apoorva patrikar
    Date: 12/31/2012 6:18:00 AM
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    bravo!! on soup after a long long time, happy new year!
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    Ndaba Sibanda
    Date: 12/25/2012 8:32:00 AM
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    Interesting poem. God bless , and happy holidays!
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    Bobb Marly
    Date: 12/9/2012 6:01:00 AM
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    True the path to rightousness starts with Gods word flowing through ones heart and out ones life.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/1/2012 4:37:00 AM
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    Quite thought provoking lines these, Laila. enjoyed reading your work.
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 11/29/2012 11:25:00 AM
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    Something to ponder about and I think that yes, sometimes we have our eyes closed for far too long, we need to try to open them--- I hope all is well with you! hugs to you :) Glad to see that you are posting again, yay for that :)!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 11/27/2012 10:28:00 AM
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    Hi Laila nice words made me think, do not think I am going to heaven so will have to prompt old satan to leaves things alone, all the best Owen
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 11/27/2012 9:53:00 AM
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    Another very wonderful verse and prayer which I've enjoyed reading my friend! Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you always! love always, Leonora
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    David Williams
    Date: 11/27/2012 1:11:00 AM
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    Hi Laila a really heartfelt plea that I like, and I will be with your dad sitting along side...David
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/26/2012 7:46:00 PM
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    Laila, a very interesting take you have on this demotion,,, love it... xox~pd
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    apoorva patrikar
    Date: 11/19/2012 7:34:00 PM
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    nice lines!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:30:00 PM
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    Dear Laila: when my time here on this ol`planet is over,and if St Peter lets me in..I`ll sit down with the Chief Himself,have a cup of coffee and have a serious discussion about the Earth`s future...you know,things are not looking good these days! Loved your very creative poem sweetie;-) Hugs and Love Always~


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