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About This Poem

without you life is


without you, life is: a beam without balance
                                 a radio without sound
                                       a mirror without glass
                                             the mirage of water in a desert

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    jackie thomas
    Date: 12/6/2012 5:34:00 AM
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    great poem!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 11/30/2012 12:01:00 PM
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    Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Vicky. Love, Carol
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    nicole marrier
    Date: 11/29/2012 11:56:00 AM
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    love your choice of words and congrats on your win.
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    olusegun Arowolo
    Date: 11/25/2012 9:07:00 AM
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    Wonderful write,Vicky....Congrats on your win...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/23/2012 6:01:00 PM
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    Vicky, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 11/23/2012 8:59:00 AM
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    An illusion...nothing! : ) Very nice, Vicky! Kuddos on your win! Ruben.
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    Joseph May
    Date: 11/23/2012 5:40:00 AM
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    congrats on your win Vicky
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/23/2012 3:24:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement Vicky xx
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    Tadon Archer
    Date: 11/18/2012 9:23:00 PM
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    Great poem!!!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/18/2012 6:35:00 PM
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    wow, I love how you did this one.
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    Cecilia Macfarlane
    Date: 11/18/2012 6:02:00 PM
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    Wow Vicky....a very heartfelt and well thought out write! Hugs
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    Constance La France
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:13:00 AM
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    Hi Vicky, thanks for commenting on my poetry, I appreciate it. This poem does hold a loneliness and sadness, well done. Constance
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/18/2012 10:59:00 AM
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    I can feel the emptiness, good job Vicky
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:34:00 AM
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    Vicky - hit me right in my broken heart. "A beam without balance" is a wonderful line. love, Kathy
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    Ralph Mason
    Date: 11/18/2012 7:29:00 AM
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    ... a poem unheard. More poems please :) warm thoughts, Ralph

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/18/2012 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice one Ralph!
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/18/2012 6:31:00 AM
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    I like the way you wrote this one... Hugs to you for a bright Sunday... Michael
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:12:00 PM
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    Very nicely written. Having someone can certainly balance life out. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem Vicky. Happy holidays, Connie
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/16/2012 5:59:00 PM
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    Very Cool, looks like a brush without bristles.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/18/2012 9:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    now, you're talking. I like it!
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 11/16/2012 2:30:00 PM
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    I can relate to this. It is so true. I once wrote a poem ( Life Without you} but I don't have it here. Thanks for sharing this one. Lucilla