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Bowl of Tears

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Below is the poem entitled Bowl of Tears which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Bowl of Tears

Broken Heart
Placed in a bowl of tears
reconstructed
Love exchanged for fears

Healed Heart
Returned to her chest
stongly beating
Joy now expressed

Loving Heart
Joyful tears in the bowl
Another Heart 
Will soon be made whole


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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 12:04:00 PM
    We all need that magic bowl of yours sometimes in our lives.....love this one! Hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/24/2012 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Available for your use any time my dear! I am sure we have both shed enough tears to fill it. Thankfully they have turned to tears of joy. Hugs back to you.
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Form is Rhyme the type of rhyme is called slip rhyme or half rhyme [tears/fears. chest expressed, bowl/while] only tears/fear is an exact rhyme ..Okies Light & Love

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/17/2012 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
    Never really gave it much thought, worth considering. I am currently finishing my book and have tended to do the chapters based on specific life events and emotions/ topics. This might be worthwhile looking at for one additional chapter. Thanks for suggestion.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/17/2012 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Trail of Tears sounds wonderful. Work it.
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:42:00 PM
    The title captured my eyes, and the poem captured my mind. (You know Richard, read with the others, its like a series, 'the tears series'(my mind is blank for a better word). I've seen some poets do part 1,2...of poems and I think it's something that needs to be explored. Who knows where it will lead? ..Nicely done!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/16/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Perhaps I can call it Trail of Tears