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ERROR

We met at sunset
The golden brown	
The known tale
His linen 
A reflection of the sun
Bathed in the most charming smile
Our souls in connection
Palm in palm we
Walked the beach
With no words
Only hearts to feel
Our thoughts
A million miles away
A perfect link
I searched his face
My perfect man
Only one wrong
His eyes said different
I stopped our trail
And stared harder
His eyes screamed error
He looked away
My heart had bumped 
Into something grave
Just another look
And truth dawned
My “sun” was taken
I whispered to him
You are another’s…
He whispered back
I am taken…

©Naa Takia, All Rights Reserved 2012

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:37:00 PM

    VICTORIA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*