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I walked amongst you

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Below is the poem entitled I walked amongst you which was written by poet Dark Mistress. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I walked amongst you


A poor man seeking more from this world,
Than a young woman's curl.

I was a man who had been loved,
Summoned to soon from above.

A prophet from within,
Absorbed of all my sins.

Allowing me to walk the land,
My footprints you've seen amongst the sand.

Shelter me from thieves.
There is no telling when I must leave…

To the inner depth of the darkest night,
I’ll hold you dear, my precious sight.

Carnivore. Eat. Enjoy your feast!
I shall claim all that has deceased. 

I accept the blame,
I shall seek no names.

A watchful eye,
Closely looking at the parting sky.

Little angel dry your tears,
I've taken all your fears.

I await a cure for the rest of world.

Come a little closer, cause & effect.
You summon me. I’ll resurrect.

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:12:00 AM
    Hi Dark Mistress very beautiful words here I like it. very poewerful indeed, all the best Owen

    Mistress Avatar Dark Mistress
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Owen. I try to write with depth & conviction. Allows the reader to sense more then just words written. As a painter would do so across a canvas, in order to create is poignant piece of art.
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Brilliant! This poem is exceptional.

    Mistress Avatar Dark Mistress
    Date: 11/18/2012 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! ? What part did you find exceptional? Or was it as a whole? Cheers! Dark_Mistress
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:13:00 PM
    Very powerful write! And well penned. Thank you for sharing!

    Mistress Avatar Dark Mistress
    Date: 11/18/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne. I do enjoy writing. I am not one to normally share, however I've been pleasantly suprised with PoetrySoup. Everyone has been very nice & welcoming. Look forward to sharing some more once the inspiration hits! ;) Cheers! Dark_Mistress
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:10:00 AM
    I like this poem, very well written - Thank you for sharing your thoughts and words with me. - Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mistress Avatar Dark Mistress
    Date: 11/16/2012 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I modified it a bit. I felt something was missing, so let me know what you think. Have a great weekend as well. ;) Cheers! Dark_Mistress