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Echoes

                                                     


                                                   room filled with echoes
                                                           killing her softly
                                                                with love

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Each line says so much, loved it very much. Lizabeth

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:00:00 AM

    The thoughts of love, can be such a beauty :) ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:14:00 PM

    love this little beauty...

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 9:56:00 PM

    Enjoyed your haiku. Must be echoes of love in a dispatching room. Just a little touch of humor. I hope the rest of your week goes well.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:48:00 AM

    This is a great and lovely Haiku my dear friend, Laila! Two thumbs up here! Well, I'm so glad to see you around again and I want to thank you for sharing your poems, your precious time to visit my work and inspiring comments! Have a wonderful and grace-filled day to you and your family! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Ahh!!Enjoyed reading your work..Sounds like an interesting room..Thanks for taking time to read my work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:41:00 PM

    Laila,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:26:00 AM

    And here comes a comments ..... with love ... - Well written haiku Laila. - Big hug from mom :)