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Crystal Clear

Richard Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux - LIFETIME Premium Member Richard Lamoureux - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Crystal Clear which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Crystal Clear

Cool spring water, have a drink
More refreshing, than you think
Clear like a crystal
Reflections of the moon light 
Dive right in, enjoy the night
Feel the water's call

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:57:00 AM
    So, that is tail-rhyme! I love the title and the rhythm is very pleasant! Great write, Rick! Blessings, Hanitra

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hopefully I got it right and haven't led you down the wrong path.
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Nice thought worded nicely. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 8:00:00 AM
    i've never done this form, Richard, this is again so inspiring, love the juxtapose,

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:16:00 AM
    The last line is awesome, feel the waters call, love that! Wonderful job exploring new forms! You impress me!

    Currin Avatar Anne Currin
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have Facebook, yeah? Ill message you the link to my page once its done!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will look forward to it!!
    Currin Avatar Anne Currin
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Funny you mention that, im in the process of making a youtube page to share my passion with the world :) ill let you know when I have it up and running!
    Currin Avatar Anne Currin
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Funny you mention that, im in the process of making a youtube page to share my passion with the world :) ill let you know when I have it p
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/16/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good so far, met with my mens group this morning and now I am waiting for my second client to show up. Wow you are multi talented, any utube video's??? Would love to hear you sing!!!
    Currin Avatar Anne Currin
    Date: 11/16/2012 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, luckily my psychology exam was a take home one, so I can spend plenty of time on it this weekend! And then I have an essay to write for my literature class as well as an issues story I have to cover for journalism. Then I have a voice class because my passion aside from writing is singing! So no exams or anything for that class, just an easy grade for doin what I do best :) how's your Friday going?
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/16/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is so sweet! How are exams coming?