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Lovers dance

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Below is the poem entitled Lovers dance which was written by poet Rollo West. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lovers dance

 
Pure, soft, velvet skin Foaming crest of ecstacy Dance upon my shore

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 3:18:00 AM
    A titillating, palpitating love medley! Loved the passion exuding from your frothy lines! I was thinking of a kindred poem. I like 'Undulating waves' in the first line, while keeping your last, two lines. Your poem has spawned new ideas. That is the hallmark of a good poem! Enjoyed your romanticscape!

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    Date: 11/16/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Stephen for stopping by. Rollo