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Let Me Teach You Love

You think your life’s been hard And nothing turns out right. You say that love you thought was real Often lasted just one night. You say deceit was your reward And you try to be so tough. Yet, I see softness in your eyes – So, let me teach you love. I’ve seen hard times myself Along some troubled roads. And when I thought true love was mine I saw all my dreams explode. Now we have another chance --- We’ve been punished long enough. So, let’s just give it one more try – Please let me teach you love. Let me teach you love – Open up your heart. If you’ve wanted real love Let me be its start. You say love walked right past you And you’re tired of being bluffed. Please give it one more honest chance And let me teach you love.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 5:47:00 AM

    Beautiful poetry Jake thanks for showing the way I thoroughly enjoyed the read, the rhythm and rhyme worked perfectly love Jayne

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:36:00 PM

    This is such a wonderful write! The rhymes are perfect and the message is so sweet and touching. Keep up the awesome work! And thank you for your kind comments on my poetry today :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:35:00 AM

    I agree with Elizabeth - another beautiful song.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:46:00 PM

    I really love this poem, Jakel Just.... wow.

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 11/23/2012 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rebecca, I enjoyed writing this one... I'll be visiting you soon... Jake
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 5:51:00 AM

    This would make a beautiful song, thank you for your comments John, have a beautiful day love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:15:00 AM

    Thank you for the truly gracious comment on my work. I love this poem, it is so heartwarming and touching, obviously from your heart and soul. Enjoyed reading, Jake.. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:47:00 PM

    True reality directly from your write BRAVO my friend, ~HUGS~ carma

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:49:00 PM

    Thank you Jake for sharing your great write...nice to read your valuable comment in my box and wishing you all the best <3<3<3 SK