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tanka

Tanka
Philosopher general
The pride of the armed forces 
Left starched underpants 
In a woman´s hot bedroom
And lost yet another combat








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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:54:00 AM

    They're often with their pants down, but not often (enough) caught... Terry (funny and biting)

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/1/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Terry
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Ooowww.

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/1/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kathy
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:20:00 PM

    haha, this is funny!

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you andrea
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Love this write! So witty and I like to see arrogant blighters lose a battle....HA

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you victoria
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Love this write! So witty and I like to see arrogant blighters lose a battle....HA

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Victoria