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Mountain Storm

Cumulonimbus lurking,
peering over white-topped peaks
like childhood's hunchbacked monsters
waiting there to pounce.
 
Shadows lick the creviced slopes
as white and green become grey
lights flash behind the drawn shades
of ominous clouds.
 
Darkness pours into valleys
where rows of birches waver
as if nervously laughing
on the river shore.
 
Relentlessly advancing
the storm growls and cracks and snaps
and the landscape disappears
behind wind and rain.

God’s angry swords slash the dark
each plunge deep with loud report
and all bow at its’ advance,
some shatter and fall.
 
Gone now, like it never came,
still grumbling as it departs
to disturb more peaceful scenes
beyond the valley.
 
Halfway up the mountainside
the sun plays at the tree line,
below, a more peaceful grey
ushers in the night.




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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Another win! I remember this one from before. You had me at Cumulonimbus - my favourite type of cloud! haha :) Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:22:00 AM

    Oh wow, I love this one. It's right up my alley. It's my favorite I've read for this contest so far. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:29:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Craig ~A.O

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:35:00 AM

    wow!!!very descriptive write my friend Craig. Congratulations on your win!! Good day! Maria

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:44:00 AM

    For awhile there, I could feel the earth vibrate under my feet.....wow, great job, Craig! You are on a roll !!! Congratulations once again!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Very well described storm Craig ....congrats...Donna

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:18:00 AM

    Craig, great write. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:42:00 PM

    Craig, this is excellent! The images portrayed are so vivid. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:14:00 PM

    another win with this stunner. I am not surprised. And congrats again!!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:09:00 PM

    Craig,, wow...love this... Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:16:00 PM

    A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:08:00 PM

    To know how I really feel about this one, you need only go to the bottom of your comments. BIG congrats on your very well deserved win!!

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:58:00 PM

    awesome...pd

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:08:00 PM

    Lovely words Craig ......Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:27:00 PM

    This is surely the best of the best. Great work Craig. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:38:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Oh my it's a 3 lover..love, love, love it! We I was there to see it with you and the family! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery, Craig. Congratulations on your fantastic win! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Congratulations for your win and thanks for sharing this beauty....Mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:03:00 PM

    Congratulations Craig on your winning top spot xx

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:49:00 AM

    This is such a cool depiction of a storm rolling through. I love your sequence of dodoitsus. Awesome job! Congrats!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:30:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 1:52:00 PM

    So Active-lurking, licking, pouring, advancing, slashing, departing--just like a storm! Love it all! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 4:58:00 PM

    definite 7's!!! these so reminded me of japanese woodblocks! another form mastered!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:28:00 PM

    soup mail ???

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive work that should be on the winners' list..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:23:00 PM

    wow, this should be a TOP win, for sure!!! Love it. Good personification always gets me.