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Goodbye

Oh haunting specter, pass and quell my fears,
Though peaceful doth my heart appear to be,
I’ll dwell behind my wishful hopeful tears
Until at last you’re here to rest with me.
 
When last we bade farewell o’re by the shore
A promise passed your lips and filled your eyes.
I held within the solemn wish you swore
And feigned a cheerful smile and waved goodbye.
 
Now jarred awake by fearful haunting dreams
To see your specter there amongst the stars,
Where from your breast a blinding bright light streams,
A path to pull me close though from afar.
 
    Dear ship of life before you slip away,
    Stop time forever on this fateful day.



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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Congrats again with this one. The ending really seals the deal!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:40:00 AM

    beautiful Craig....congratulations...Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Congrats, Craig. Outstanding. Nice going, my friend. Happy Easter. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Craig, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Craig. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:44:00 PM

    wow, what a sonnet, Craig!! You can be very proud of this one. congrats on your top win.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 1:42:00 PM

    Craig, this is an amazing write! I love it! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Congrats on the super win!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Excellent piece,Craig...Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win in this contest...Kudos to you,pal..

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Such a cool love story Craig Crongrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your wonderful winning sonnet Craig xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:10:00 PM

    congratulations on your win, very nice poem

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:17:00 PM

    Craig, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:03:00 PM

    Well done, nice and smooth. I know it's a weird compliment, but hey, sometimes it's difficult to get sonnets to flow well.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:41:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Craig

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Wow Craig you must be shakespeare incarnate. Well done. ...Seren

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:33:00 PM

    wonderful 1st place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest..Congrats to you Craig