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Journey's End

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Below is the poem entitled Journey's End which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Journey's End

Comet decending from sky
Silvery trail in it's wake
Plummets to Earth with a crash
Journey completed

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:13:00 AM

    I love this! I hardly see this form, what great use of it! Once again you write a breath taking poem :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2012 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne!
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:44:00 AM

    like this form, Richard, interesting how you wrote this,, like it..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, all part of my education, I have never received any poetic training so this is all new to me.
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:52:00 PM

    Coolio!!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:05:00 PM

    Wonderfully done my friend! There is just one thing you might want to take care of though...the first line in this Dodoitsu is 8 syllables and should be 7! I know, sometimes it sneaks up on you and surprises you that you didn't have the correct number of syllables! It happens to me still as well! But aside from this minor error, this poem is very awesome, completed rather nicely! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this afternoon! What a fun write this one is! Great Work!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russel have you read my poem Melted Tears? It is dedicated to you.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I will change it.
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Never heard of a Dodoitsu before but that's not surprising for me. What are the characteristics that make it one?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    7 7 7 5 no Rhymes. I am attempting to expand my horizons, so I am trying out some different styles.