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A missed poem

Elly Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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A missed poem

he carries his newborn child
passengers on the  backseat
a widower just cycles
no choice but his bike 

father and rickshaw rider
sad thoughts of his dead wife
lovingly holding his child
he rides with his fate

a girl feels her fathers love
happy passengers arrived
a widower and newborn
on their bike for life

@ Elly Wouterse

Form - a reality dodoitsu (if that form does not exist.......  maybe this is a reason...?? 
Note: About a,  great,  rickshaw rider 
Describing an image and a true story from India.(Mail on line Oktober 25th - an online newspaper ) about  - among other things - parental love, perseverance and hope... 

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 1:08:00 PM
    Elly, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 11:29:00 PM
    Elly, Even in the simplest poem you pull on the deepest emotion. Your works are always a ride worth taking!

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 3/13/2014 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY Dave. TY for the read and commenting the way you did(again)........ Reading this: What a way to start my day ;-) This was actually on of my first writes using this poetry form........... a long time ago... And if poetry can be anti-poetical in a poetical way... maybe this poem is an example......... Glad you enjoyed the read. Dutch Greetings Elly
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 3:28:00 PM
    congrats on your fine win, elly.. great topic and imagery.. huggs

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 3/12/2014 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY 4 your congrats and comment with content!. Dutch Greetings Elly.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 6:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, elly

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:28:00 AM
    Very touching poem.I am from India.

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/16/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Based on a very touching story....... TY for taking the time to read & comment and its content. :-) Greetings from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne