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About This Poem

Mobile Home

Turtle walks slowly on ground
Shell is home and protection
A land and water dweller
Owns first mobile home


By:  Richard Lamoureux For Russell Sivy's contest: Natural Dodoitsu
First attempt at this style, hope I got it right

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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 2/7/2013 2:12:00 PM
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    A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/7/2013 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Skat
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/12/2013 9:33:00 PM
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    Congrats to the funniest one on the winners list!! I sure enjoyed this one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This one came crawling to me and bit me on the funny bone.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/11/2013 10:03:00 PM
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    RICHARD, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda
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    craig cornish
    Date: 1/11/2013 10:45:00 AM
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    Funny one Richard--Congrats!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/11/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Had fun with this one.thanks for commenting
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 1/11/2013 12:22:00 AM
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    This made me smile..clever! congrats to you. BG

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/11/2013 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Barbara.
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    Melani Udaeta
    Date: 1/10/2013 9:01:00 PM
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    I love animals :) cute!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/10/2013 11:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me too, thanks for commenting
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/9/2013 10:39:00 PM
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    Well done broughta smile to my face ...Seren

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/9/2013 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Seren
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 1/9/2013 9:36:00 PM
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    Oh how clever and true. congratulations Richard. Love, Joyce

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/9/2013 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much.
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 1/9/2013 2:46:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your fantastic win, Richard! Always, Annalise

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/9/2013 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, this was a fun one.
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
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    Congratulations ...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/9/2013 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mehnaz
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/9/2013 1:20:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your winning spot Richard , this is so good xx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/9/2013 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy
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    kash poet
    Date: 11/15/2012 6:16:00 AM
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    haha...So true.A cute poem.Enjoyed the read.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kash, I like the new photo, nice seeing you without the glasses
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 11/14/2012 2:53:00 PM
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    Lol, ahh too funny, Richard. Yes. Never thought of that. True mobil :))

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it, thanks!


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