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Bees Knees

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Bees Knees

You’re the bee’s knees between my knees.
Sweet as nectar, 
Tart like blood.
A wolf in sheep’s clothing
Shopping for sheep,
Shopping for mercy,
Shopping for me.

To the naked eye
You’re just fine
But to the naked touch
Your skins too rough.
Your eyes too beady. 
You’ve lost your touch.
The lone wolf in sheep’s clothing
Losing his meaning.  

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 7:51:00 PM

    congratulations on your featured poem of the week ;}

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Ira, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

    Dawson Avatar Ira Dawson Date: 11/29/2012 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Ira, welcome you to the P-Soup. - I've read all your poems .... and you write very well. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day Ira. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:55:00 PM

    What an awesome write! Seriously, I love this.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Interesting work..Sara

    Dawson Avatar Ira Dawson Date: 11/14/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!