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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Craig

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:51:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Craig !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:08:00 PM
    awesome. SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Woven beautifully, Craig. I read this two wks ago but couldn't post a comment...the tone is somber, yet with a glimmer of hope...u write beautifully, friend. Def a first place write!!!Thanks for your comments on my work also...I tho't my dodoitsu was one of my better ones too...thanks and Happy New Year!! :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 3:58:00 PM
    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading your work today..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:54:00 PM
    glad to see this on Cyndi's contest... always...pd

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Ah yes...I was reared at a Christian school (my father was on the faculty) They had a magnificent student choir and the tradition was they made the rounds to each house and sang Christmas Carols outside...Great stuff, Craig!...Congrats and have a very happy and blessed 2013 - Tim

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win friend Craig!! superd write indeed!!Happy New Year!!! :)

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Really a peaceful poem, congrats on your big win Craigh, i enjoyed my read by the beauty of your verses :D

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Congrats on the big win, Craig, really deserving!! Jag

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 4:32:00 PM
    A beautiful write, Craig. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:59:00 PM
    This is such a beauty, and so well deserving!! Congratulations to you, Craig!!!

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:34:00 AM
    I love this poem, I feel happy after reading. Well done and congratulations

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Totally amazing! I would like to see this set to music and sung in praise. Congratulations on this first place win, Craig :-)

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:06:00 AM
    wow, Craig, Cyndi chose her first place very WELL. This is stunning. LOVE It, and congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 7:50:00 AM
    I LOVE this, Craig! Congratulations on your 1st place win. The flow and rhyme scheme are flawless. I especially love the imagery of the first two lines. Bravo!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Hi Deb, thanks but nothing here is contradictory since it is totally contemporary thoughts, many song and people today still refer to Christmas and its' parts as yule and my reference to the star was only symbolism for God and hope and love which we often find away from the bustle. Clearly metaphor--no confusion. Every thought could apply to Christmas Eve this year or any.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:03:00 PM
    Most excellent you kinda had a double ending there and content wise it is a bit confusing to speak of the pagan yule & the Christmas Star? Maybe sharpen the focus on this one you do have plenty of good verses >light & Love

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    Date: 11/28/2012 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Please soup mail me with any thoughts, if one was to overly concern themselves with semantics and evolving derivations our creative flow would be severely restricted. I hesitate to appeal to scholars such as yourself but to the 99% who relax in the thoughts. Thank You