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When I See You

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When I See You

When I see you
My mind turns blank
The words escape
From their rightful place
I begin to freeze
As words of nonsense roll off my tongue.
Gibberish, they are.
You think of me as a fool
Then turn to leave.
Not even the words
"I love you"
Could change our relationship now.
You think of me as crazy.
Stupid.
Ignorant.
I can never manage 
To muster a word
When I see you.

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Very expressive and emotive work..Sara