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TILL GARNET LIGHT BATHES ALL



My footsteps mark a deeper, keener edge tracing the drone of northern hills My footsteps mark a deeper, keener edge on rails spinning my mind’s windmills. A rush of bushy gray quite lean tracing the drone of northern hills, pricks through a longing like a scream. Bold emerald limbs of ferns now churn a rush of bushy gray quite lean to gaze back thrice…in lone sojourn as hilltops lull of winters passed. Bold verdant limbs of ferns now churn To dream again through soul downcast while young marbles begin to roll as hilltops lull of winters passed. Till garnet light bathes hope’s cheer, whole, my footsteps mark a deeper, keener edge And young marbles begin to roll My footsteps mark a deeper, keener edge. by nette onclaud Hope Contest of Craig Cornish 14 Nov12

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:51:00 AM

    A fabulous write from you Nette!Great entry to the contest.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:40:00 AM

    I am here!!!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:40:00 PM

    This is a beautiful write of a difficult form. I love all the imagery here. Also, thank you for reading my work. Good luck in the contest, Jancarl

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:12:00 PM

    YOu made it so eloquent with the imagery, Nette. beyond the ordinary!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:05:00 PM

    You have shown a great mastery with this incredibly tough form my friend! I tried to do this form several times and had a very difficult time with it but you have shown to do this form with ease! I really enjoyed this incredibly wondrous and hopeful write my friend! Thanks you for giving us this poem to read Nette, I have truly enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this afternoon! What a delight is has been to read! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Good one..Reads like winning material..I don't think that I would like taking a chance of walking on those marbles though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:17:00 AM

    This has a very elevated, intuitive touch running on eloquent metaphors and pictures. Rhyme and repetitive thoughts add splendor to this hopeful offering. A must-read!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:53:00 AM

    ‡ Such Longing Yearning To Perhaps Eclipse The Somber Gray, Sweet Beautiful Fascinating Nette, Day Clinging Unto It Dreary Vine. Reaching Its Hands Unto The Heavens To Grasp This The Light Of Once Distant Hope ? A Renewel Within A Laboring Yet Dreamful Breath; Gazing Towards The Skies, A Priceless Life. Behold, And All Things Have Become New ˜ Beautiful, Tis Your Beauty. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:05:00 AM

    Love it my dear Nette, luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:53:00 AM

    Nice piece