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11 - 2012 haiku - 004

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furnace breaks down, bodies entwined, we make our own heat









*haiku that might be breaking conventional rules
upheld by some of my haiku-writing friends



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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:29:00 PM

    You love sick puppy, Chris!! A fantabulous haiku if I ever read one b4!!! Miss reading your work! Hope all is well in your court. gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:56:00 AM

    self efficiency, i need some of that, this is a wonder Chris....

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:46:00 AM

    LOVE IT

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:46:00 AM

    hahaha, what Ruben said. And yet, shouldn't the reading of haiku be enjoyable?

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:44:00 PM

    A fine example of cause and effect! Dont show this one to Charles! Im having fun with your haiku...dont get mad! (I have a lot of them in my repertoire!)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:18:00 AM

    Oooh La La! :) Hugs, catie

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:27:00 PM

    I just read this haiku with a sleepy eyes and mind...and found a completely new way to read it...2 new ways, actually! Astounding...ha!