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A false Questionku

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A false Questionku which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A false Questionku

                              <> <>         golden LEAVES AROUND the ranch:                                                                                                                           
                                       <>         
Autumn leave's leaves                 <>   --   <>    <> you                   
Leave the ranch in gold:            <>                               see
Are branches in their sleeves?                                            them
                                  And       /             <>                         sway,
          ---------              real-   /                                                  <>
         (           )              ly      /                            <>                   <>
         ----------            grow-  /                                                  
                                   ing      /                                  <>            golden
                                   old?      /                                                         
See,  the  b r a n c h   in   autumn                                                    to
                !                                 !                                   <>           the
                Slips   in   a u t u m n   sleeves;                                      ground:
                                   !                         !                                          
                                   And the r a n c h all golden                       dyeing
                                                 !                        !                 <>   their
                                                 Sleeps on golden leaves               little
                                                                                      <><>    death?
                  


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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
    This one made a GREAT shape. Nice meeting you today.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Hey there! Just wanted to turn free verse into shape... Still wondering if it's a good idea... Couldn't resist... Hope it won't deceive anyone!? Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Hello Hanitra, just a note to say Hi and that I miss your visits. I hope all is well.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Beautiful, this is more like art than writing, your an artist with word Hanitra, so glad you picked Psalm 23, to read on his birthday it is a good choice, sending you love and light my dear, wish your husband a Happy Birthday for me xxx

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Hi Hanitra! good to see ya! love this! jimbo

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:17:00 PM
    Lovely..hope i didn't mess you up on the terenzella..my brain was mixing it up with the villanella! LOL Thanks so much for stoping by my writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Happy New Year Hanitra! Appreciated your comment on Mud Pie Sale. Peace be with you and yours.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Thank you, Hanitra for your comments. I guess I'm hooked on the " _ku" I 've been writing haikus since 1999. I just started writing questionkus. I honestly love this form of writing. Thanks again and have a happy new year.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:10:00 AM
    Hi Hanitra Thanks to your suggestion the Questionku is an official form on the soup.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/18/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If you hadn't commented on my form I wouldn't have considered submitting.
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:19:00 PM
    i like this Hanitra, the form is slightly strange to me, but the content's of the poem i really like...

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Soup mail

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Hanitra this is reall cool, I like it a lot, well done...David

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:21:00 AM
    I never tried the Questionku,it seems so very challenging and great.. thanks for stopping by my posts.. You definitely have a long nickname,too hard to remember.. so Voahanesque

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:01:00 AM
    And now the summer's faded and springtime finally grieves. There's nothing left for us to do but watch as autumn leaves. Beautiful poem Hanitra.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:30:00 PM
    Hanitra! Hey, this is grand! Nice metaphors of nature's beauty! Love the first question the most! gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:16:00 PM
    No worries from me, rules are made to be bent, I am more interested in the emotions you have captured. Thanks as well for the advertisement, I would be thrilled if others gave it a try.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Hi V, thanks for commenting on my poetry, I really appreciate that. Your poem here is amazing, well done, Constance

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:51:00 PM
    wow... love the title, and what you did here.. the image is outstanding, golden like your thoughts... true beauty,,, always~pd

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:16:00 PM
    Ahh! Originality! I love your "QuestionKu"! It tastes like Free verse to me! Very nice, Voahanitriniaina! May I call you Voaha? LOL! Ruben.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/17/2012 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OOps! In fact, I forgot to say that this Questionku is a false one, because I couldn't resist the temptation and went on adding new verses. So, it's Questionku + something else, hence the "I do not know?"-form... I hope Richard won't be too severe about it. I'll do better next time. For the time being, I'll trust a very talented poet and theoricist, Ruben, and change the 'I do not know?" into the "Free verse" you are proposing. Thank you so much for your big help! :) Blessings, Hanitra
    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If you like this new form, Ruben, check it out at Richard Lamoureux's place: he invented it and gave the rules: 3 lines:4-5-6; ending with a question. Just try it: the rhythm is very pleasant! Blessings, Hanitra
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