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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
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My first Questionku
The Soldier's back, Knocking at the door; Who Cares; no One; no War...
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/2/2013 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comments good write here! Light & love
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2013 6:30:00 AM
Hi Hanitra So nice to hear from you, I have missed our conversations. I hope 2013 finds you well. If you have a chance check out my new form, I call it Understepping.
harry horsman
Date: 11/21/2012 2:59:00 PM
strong message here Hanitra.. this is a very profound poem...
robert johnson
Date: 11/21/2012 9:07:00 AM
If only we could finally stop and truly hault all war. Then all that there'd be left to do is sit back and adore. Beautiful emotion in the last line Hanitra. With the palastinian going's on right now, it has even more meaning. Peace be with us all.
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2012 5:10:00 PM
I love it Hanitra I feel like it is the birth of a Grandchild. Soup mail
Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2012 6:09:00 PM
I am sure that the soldier's family really care.I am sure that sometimes men and women returning from war feel that no one cared except for their close family membes..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Your comments were so uplifting..Sara
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! Thanks God, there are many blessed soldiers and soldier's families who can begin a new life together; but I didn't want to forget those - and they are still numerous in many countries - who lost everything in war...Love, Hanitra
Catie Lindsey
Date: 11/15/2012 5:34:00 PM
a lot of sentiment in this one, Hanitra. Very nice :) hugs, Catie :)
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Catie! In a sense, your poems did inspire me about the essence of life. Loved your honesty, looking straight into the face of pain and dealing about spiritual healin...Love you, Hanitra
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/14/2012 12:59:00 PM
VRA.,,,, wow..... long lost tear... pd
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:46:00 AM
Yes, sighs, sighs and sighs...Life, dear PD...Love, Hanitra
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2012 7:50:00 PM
I really like this one.
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 9:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your works today, dear Andrea! Especially, "Deep Dreams"! Fantastic write, indeed! I'm seriously considering the eventuality of joining you in the contest, just to participate: the way you put... I felt very much concerned, out of a sudden...And I like this feeling. Love, Hanitra