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In Hiding

Shadows hide what face-paint could not erase Pain shown all over her face Sadness erupts inside Seeing what she truly looks like brings fear Tears flow as mirrors crash down Breaks in many pieces Pit of her stomach clenches when she’s out Hiding when she has the chance Running away always Time doesn’t seem to heal her painful wounds Inside she wishes to die Secretly wanting death Hope fades like the sun on dark cloudy days Her face contorts to her pain She must endure always She wonders if she will ever be free As her days are filled with tears Unknown is her future
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:47:00 PM

    Very emotive and expressive work..Interesting that you are speaking in the feminine...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the very uplifting and encouraging work.Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:18:00 PM

    BRILLIANT POETRY RUSSELL LUV .. VIBRANT CANVAS OF FLOWING PHOTOS IN WORDS WITH DRAMATIC FLARE AS TO HER PLIGHT .. MY FRIEND YOUR IMAGINATION IS A GRAND WORK OF ART .. FEELING THE DEEP EMOTION OF THIS TREMENDOUS PIECE MY FRIEND ..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:52:00 PM

    This is nicely done, Russell. I like when you do this kind of poetry.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:37:00 PM

    You crafted a work of art here Russel. I felt drawn into her sad painful existance. Well done!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:28:00 PM

    You penned here a very creative, powerful and emotional write here my friend. Great job! Hugs, Gail