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John or Rachel

Looking clumsily over the bare trees so soon to again bud after the cold is gone
Just because what I want has not been shown, doesn't mean it's time to quit walking down the road.

I read of everafters, and forevermores, of lusts, and greeds, and idol things, remarked "bravo!" "a masterpiece", is fame worth the toll?
The cost of ones soul?

I try to make amends in the filthiness, I leave brushing off the bad attitudes off my shoulder and know the same people I will pray for all the more.

It is not I, that is the most important yet fumbling I fail at times to see~
What in the world I did to make you truly hate me.

I can't go back and appologize, continueously, for things I have already to you.
And I am brand new in God's eyes, that is so precious  to me.

And just as the cold shall come in the Northern sky
It is temporary, and so is life~
So finally I am good with goodbye~

:) 


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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Keep peace with yourself Cindy... :o) I haven't seen you on here in a while?

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:36:00 PM

    I like it. You already did. That's all that matters. You showed your heart, Cindy. Adore. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:59:00 PM

    Very passionately written Cindy

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:41:00 PM

    wow... Cindy,, strong... you are precious...pd

    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu Date: 11/13/2012 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.... love ya chicky doodle :)