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Hidden souls

My soul stays hidden in shadows. I 
kept it hidden from pain. I hidden 
from love. No one couldn't see my 
true self. A bright sun light shined 
over the shadow that had hidden 
my soul. The light shined and filled 
my soul with love, exposing the man 
I truley was. Burning light fills my 
soul with pain. To rise from the 
shadows to be free for the world to 
see and love..

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:39:00 AM

    Good work

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:29:00 PM

    beautiful write.enjoyed reading your work.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Hi Victor, welcome to P-Soup - You're good at writing poetry, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - (To get comments, you must give back comments) - Looking forward to reading more in the future. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)