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About This Poem

AUTUMNAL PAIR

AUTUMNAL PAIR

cabin in the woods
curling chimney smoke and frost
jack pine looking on

alert hungry gulls
in the swirling autumn flakes
holiday’s assurance

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    Kaye S-
    Date: 11/27/2012 9:14:00 AM
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    These are beautiful, Daver... I like how I can picture this in my mind... thank you for the nice comments you left with me...
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    Joe Maverick
    Date: 11/24/2012 1:35:00 PM
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    I felt relaxed as I read this piece Daver Wishing you well, joe..)
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    Date: 11/21/2012 8:08:00 PM
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    DaverStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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    Gail DeBole
    Date: 11/18/2012 5:20:00 PM
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    Very nice. Like this.

    DeBole Avatar Gail DeBole Date: 11/30/2012 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Favorite artists - Norman Rockwell, van Gogh...burple (LOL) very clever!
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    John Wulf
    Date: 11/15/2012 8:20:00 AM
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    Lovely ku.
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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 11/14/2012 4:52:00 PM
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    Beautiful autumn scene, Daver! "Jack pine looking on"...lovely image! This is making me think of one we used to visit that was similar to this.:) Had been our Thanksgiving retreat when the kids were all home. Keep well! Love, Mikki
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/13/2012 5:09:00 PM
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    hey, you are doing wintery ones too. With those swirling autumn flakes, old man winter is on his way. I'm with you. I hate to see snow on the way!! these are great, Daver.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/13/2012 10:09:00 AM
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    A very good haiku, Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/13/2012 9:57:00 AM
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    Very nice my friend.. enjoyed... Michael


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