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Me Versus The 4th Grader

Monsoon yet to come -------> Me
If it has come, I will die!!! --------> Audrey - 4th grader 
Poor little smell goat ---------> Me

Author Note:
I found out her verse is really innocent, peppy and a bit clueless, but still look hilarious though, so I decide to post it. She becomes addicted in Haiku since I asked her to battle with me after our lesson time was over. :p

*After the Haiku finished:

Me: Why Monsoon could make you die? (wondering)
Audrey: Because I cannot swim. (with innocent face)
Me: I thought you were afraid to shower by the rain, just like goats (she pouts)

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:36:00 PM

    what fun you had!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:10:00 AM

    Interesting work by you and the child..Enjoyed reading ...Sara

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 8:30:00 AM

    This is so cool, I would have loved a teacher like you.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/14/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Richard :), pleasure to have a visit from you :) - Regards, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:32:00 PM

    what brought this...on...LOL

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/13/2012 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maybe next time English Quintains? XD
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/13/2012 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    she's a smart kid, always thirst for new things, so rather than always just pouring a plain water in the glass of her intelligence, why not I try to mix it with syrup or maybe a lemonade instead, study also needs to be fun and fresh, doesn't it? And surprisingly she enjoyed :D
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:31:00 PM

    wow... I love this Yanny, you are a wonderful person,,, sharing the soup with others... especially the young ones... the innocence captures many places... always~pd