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My Hands


Your voice travels all around my soul..
Clinging to pieces that warmly unfold..

Temperatures rise as words are swallowed..
With silent gestures that our hands will follow..



by Michael J Falotico
for Debbie's Contest

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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:54:00 PM

    soup mail.... pd

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:04:00 PM

    Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:04:00 PM

    Michael, , congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Great verse, Michael! I love it! It's one of the top-top in my book. Congrats on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:54:00 AM

    you know Michael..I could never finish..you are alike a whole empire ,..and will I be able to do justice...to a man... who cannot be praised enough...It will like a dream to write anything at all about you...

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:03:00 AM

    lovely couplet..congratulations friend Michael on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:30:00 AM

    Beautiful Michael and big congratulations on your winning place , hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:08:00 PM

    so few words instill passion mingled with romance painting a marvelous visual Michael luv .. always pure joy experiencing your thoughts .. JG in festive mode as we r sending u to and family the very best and blessed Thanksgiving Day luv .. forever yours .xoxo

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:32:00 AM

    wow, Micheal, so short in words, yet prolific in sentiment, this is really beautiful....

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:58:00 PM

    Wow! incredible piece. I love it so much. Thanks Michael. :-)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:58:00 AM

    This is such a gorgeous write, I am in such awe with your talent my friend! You have written a magnificent and beautiful poem here Michael! What a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:15:00 AM

    - L - O - V - E - it Michael !!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:10:00 AM

    Hi, Mike. Thanks for reading my stuff. This couplet is subtle and tender. Like it mucho. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Nice to read you once again. Been busy, hope to read more later. Take care Michael, and God bless, much love, Your friend in poetry,Cindy