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Together Forever

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Together Forever

There once was a girl and a guy
their love was more than love.
But their love was soon to part,
in minutes they would be together 
only at heart.

She lies in her bed waiting to die,
as he sits, he thinks in his head,
"I wish I was dead"
"There is nothing more that I would love,
then to go with you into heaven above"
He thinks to himself
"If only there was a way,
a way to keep you in my arms for another day"

He turns to her and says,
" I'll love you forever and when you die,
I can do nothing but cry"
She lifts her head from her dying bed and whispers to him,
"I love you with all of my heart"
She held his hand to say goodbye.
He looked into her eyes and saw her try,
try to hang on to what was already gone.
He held her hand and felt her pulse drop,
but before anyone knew what had happened,
they both were gone.

Together at heart, we will never part.
Forever and ever, we will be together.

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  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:35:00 PM
    This is a unique poem! I like it :) Thank you for your kind words on my poem 'angel wings'. Grandparents are so special aren't they? I think we could say 'together at heart, we will never part' for them too! hugs.

    Valencia Avatar Deeana Valencia
    Date: 1/29/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes they are, thank u for ur comments.