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Broken Free

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Broken Free

As I sit and write
I look around at my life
no longer filled with constant worries and strife.
Separated from chains and boundaries unproclaimed.
I take charge of my life,
No one else but me.
From these chains I'm now set free
From this point on happiness I see.

Tomorrow is another day
clear the path and open a new gateway.
For this life on Earth lasts only so long,
I will enjoy my life from this day on.
No one but me 
is responsible for what I see.
I am happy now.
I live my life for me.
It seems as though, I have broken free.

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Its funny how long we drag those chains around til we say "enough". Well done Deanna

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:05:00 PM
    Enjoy your freedom, written with feeling....Seren

    Valencia Avatar Deeana Valencia
    Date: 11/13/2012 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Seren..I do now.