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All Together

He tried for what seemed like forever
To finally get it all together.
The more he tried,
The more he cried.
Now he'll be content with never.

Limerick

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:17:00 AM

    One is never too old or too young to get it together..Enjoyed your Limerick..Now that I am old sometimes I get it all together and can't remember what in the world I did with it..Sara

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Well written limerick....good one Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Clever, funny, great limerick! Cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Guess you gotta compromise sometime... ;-) Terry