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Foggy Morn

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Oh! Foggy morn cloud that hovers
       Close to mother earth's ground
Surrounded by mist and moisture
       No visibility found

Cows out grazing enjoy green grass
       Many cars and trucks move
Headed here and there, life goes on
       Danger lurks _please remove

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:16:00 PM

    You are a true observer of nature out in the country, Sara. Keep up your great poetry!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:41:00 PM

    A PERFECT PICTURE RESONATES THRU THESE LINES SARA .. WE HAD SUCH A DAY HERE WITH MISTY CLOUDS AND HEAVY TRAFFIC RUMBLING .. INTERESTING VIEW TO IMAGINE LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:22:00 PM

    You see so much even when it is foggy, as always well done. You take lovely photos with your mind.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:33:00 PM

    ohh, i like the movement, imagery and overall feel to this awesome write!...not foggy but bright write, sara... fascinating view from here!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

    ! SoupMail, Sweet Beautiful Sara. Have A Beautiful Day. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:14:00 PM

    Vivid description!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:46:00 AM

    Just me, enjoying your poetry this morning. Take care and God bless ya Sara, Cindy

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:12:00 PM

    ‡ I Am Not Ever Going To Remove Anything, LOL. Well, Maybe Sometimes When My Heart Slips Into Passions Loving Grips, Sweet Beautiful Sara, Then I Might Think About An Edit Perhaps, LOL. I Say What I Feel I Feel What I Say; Be It Right Wrong Or Anything Else ? I Am Glad To Find Your Precious Loving Heart Posting Your Wonderful Words. Got To Watch Out For That Fog But Hey, Here Today Gone Tomorrow Open The Gates Saint Peter, I Am Home, LOL. Your Verse Paints You Beautiful, Sara. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:10:00 PM

    Your description is so very vivid and delightful my friend! You have brushed up on your foggy images I see and created a masterful poem here Sara! What a fanciful piece, quite the elaborate poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Sara, wow... you got yourself a foggy image... ha ha.. I can't see you... How about them cows, gazing the green... love the verse and image... always~pd

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 11/12/2012 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We could not see ten feet in front of us on our road trip this morning..I went to get nuke today..Sara