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Deep Dreams

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Deep Dreams

In the true depth of the darkness There is a deep streaking likeness Of light blasting onto my weary face Showing a tired old form of disgrace Needing a hope of the ages, a friendly smile Needing a great hug, helping hand by the mile She finds me with sorrow in my heart My dreams she sparks, my love impart A love that I don’t deserve she gives Freely in my dreams, she forgives
Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's "Deep Dreams" contest 11/12/2012

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Russell. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:52:00 AM
    hmmm, I had not even seen this one yet. Way to go in the contest, Russell. Good one and congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:02:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:55:00 PM
    Russell, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:06:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful Poem Russell and a well deserving win. You have given touching shapes to your emotions. Great write. Congrats my friend. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Congratulations, Russell! I really love the fourth couplet especially. Well done!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:04:00 AM
    I so like this one Russ, its very real, very emotional. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:01:00 AM
    Big congratulations Russel a well desereved win xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Congrats Russell on your 3rd place win in my deep dream contest.... Michael

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Congrats Russell ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:11:00 PM
    BEAUTIFUL EMOTION MY FRIEND WRITTEN FROM DEEP IN THE HEART OF LOVE .. A CHERISHED COUPLET RUSSELL LUV .. WONDERFUL WORK OF ART .. WINNING WISHES .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR YOUR ALWAYS KIND AND ENCOURAGING WORDS ..THEY R SO SPECIAL TO ME .. I AM STILL HAVING MAJOR PROBLEMS VIEWING POETS LISTS TO COMMENT AND TPS DOES NOT SEEM INTERESTED IN HELPING ME .. I AM SUPER FRUSTRATED NOW .. SO HAPPY TO BE ABLE TO READ U TONITE LUV..

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:36:00 PM
    Russell, you took me to a whole new level of dreams.. Only in dreams some moments are possible and not wasted away... a very touching ending... always~pd