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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:53:00 PM
    interesting write, love the last sentence "The stroking of the hair that grandma gives, is the only real that is truly there."

    Tolman Avatar James Tolman
    Date: 11/12/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading! Glad to be here