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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 9:10:00 AM
    Well done, Tim...jimbo

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Tim. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:44:00 AM
    This is very deep and beautiful.Congratulations on your win,Tim

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:57:00 AM
    wow, this is an intense one, Tim. I can see how it got onto the winners' list. Congrats on your win with this sad but beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:14:00 AM
    inner rhyme and inner rhythm and a picture cristal clear I can relate while breathing this poem) so so so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! felicitations Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:08:00 PM
    Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:57:00 PM
    Tim, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:18:00 AM
    congrats on your win Tim

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:04:00 AM
    Congratulations! A really great write. What you describe in the first couplet happens to me often.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:12:00 AM
    A truer dream [nod] I don't have sweet dreams often either...Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Congratulations Tim a lovely piece xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:49:00 AM
    Congrats Tim on your win in my deep dream contest... Michael

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:47:00 AM
    well done and congrats ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:02:00 PM
    greeat tonality and mood you have here, tim... you hooked it with your last couplet!... fantastic!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Great poem!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:15:00 PM
    A good poem with a strong finish. Good job.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Tim,,, good luck...pd

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:43:00 PM
    That sounds more like a nightmare..Great work..Reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:30:00 PM
    hi Tim great couplet, hope your dreams come true, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:43:00 AM
    A beautiful couplet Tim, I hope your dreams come true xx