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In The Corners

     When the lights dim
I will drift into your dreams
      lightly touching you

                                       Small whispers breathing
                                       in the corners of your soul
                                              bringing images
                                          

                                                                                 A slideshow of us
                                                                            with a faded yesterday
                                                                                memories not lost
                                                                              
                                           
                                          

                                                                        

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:41:00 AM

    You're such a romantic..another beautiful piece.I like the layout of the poem..Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Fine bittersweet work here! Keep 'em coming! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:12:00 AM

    Beautiful

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:19:00 PM

    like these, Michael, love the profoundness...

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:48:00 PM

    FEELING EVERY SET AND LINE OF EMOTIONAL BLISS OF YESTERDAY'S DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U PRESENT A PICTURE OF SOFT ECSTASY WITH CHARMING NOSTALGIA ,, OH I AM THERE .. JG FEELING IT ALL ..XOXO

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:37:00 PM

    ‡ Sounds Lovely, My Dear Michael. Soothing The Heart As They Lay To Rest And Wait For Your Visit. Speaking Of Which Thank You For Your Own; Very Kind. Hugs, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:35:00 PM

    This is an amazing write, Michael. I love every single line, which is rare. Officially "faved" :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:18:00 PM

    love the way you set this one up...great images in this piece as well...romantic poem for sure! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:01:00 PM

    So romantic and I enjoyed the page layout too! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:49:00 PM

    a beautifully gentle, romantic senryu set you have here, michael, I especially like 1 and 3 :-)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:34:00 PM

    well penned Michael... thanks for stopping by.......

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:26:00 PM

    In the Corners is such a lovely title for this set of romantic haiku, Michael. Very very nice.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:48:00 PM

    This pulls me right in, what a graceful write. Wonderfully penned my dear poet friend! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:06:00 AM

    I have already drifted off Michael, drowning , just able to hear those sweet whispers...

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:52:00 AM

    This is truly amazing, what tenderness you exude within this powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly terrific and blazingly wonderful poem this afternoon! What a delightful and heartfelt piece you have written Michael, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:28:00 AM

    This poem is gorgeous Michael. Thanks for sharing yet another gem of yours. Hugs always, Gail

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:23:00 AM

    SUPER WOW AND SO SWEET!! EXCELLENT SENRYUS MICHAEL! I love THEM ALL! A winner for sure! Thank you so much for stopping by and your very inspiring comments! I wish you all the best! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:34:00 AM

    This is an amazing write from you Michael.Enjoyed very much.