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Haiku

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Haiku

soft damp heather squashed
hot lips and passion now spent
two naked bodies 
© ~GG~ 12/11/2012

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 PM
    Hi Mandy, this is a great write, great imagery. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:47:00 AM
    I really like this one..That is laying it all out there..I haven't checked the winners' list so don't know if to give congratulations..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

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    Date: 11/13/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    no Sara not a winner I'm afraid xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:25:00 PM
    ...and passion reigns...Awesome!

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    Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vicky xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:27:00 PM
    wowowow, what a way to include nature. GREAT entry!

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    Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well it has been drummed into me that haiku is nature based so why not a bit of soft warm heather xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:02:00 PM
    I love this passionate haiku, Mandy

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    Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks jack xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Woo HOO. Now that's a Haiku!!! Love it my poet dear friend. Hugs Michael

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    Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Big hugs back at you Michael xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:32:00 AM
    wow you are on "Ilkley Moor" this is awesome Mandy,

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    Date: 11/12/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks harry I keep trying with my haiku, thanks for your tuition xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Wow!!!! Feeling the heat!

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    Date: 11/12/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    good, tha'ts the idea. lol. Thanks Kash xx