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Haiku

soft damp heather squashed
hot lips and passion now spent
two naked bodies 
© ~GG~ 12/11/2012

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Hi Mandy, this is a great write, great imagery. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:47:00 AM

    I really like this one..That is laying it all out there..I haven't checked the winners' list so don't know if to give congratulations..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no Sara not a winner I'm afraid xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:25:00 PM

    ...and passion reigns...Awesome!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:27:00 PM

    wowowow, what a way to include nature. GREAT entry!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well it has been drummed into me that haiku is nature based so why not a bit of soft warm heather xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:02:00 PM

    I love this passionate haiku, Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks jack xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Woo HOO. Now that's a Haiku!!! Love it my poet dear friend. Hugs Michael

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Big hugs back at you Michael xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:32:00 AM

    wow you are on "Ilkley Moor" this is awesome Mandy,

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/12/2012 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks harry I keep trying with my haiku, thanks for your tuition xx
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:12:00 AM

    Wow!!!! Feeling the heat!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/12/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    good, tha'ts the idea. lol. Thanks Kash xx