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Four in haiku

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Four in haiku

butterflies flying 
I see them, beautiful 
want to go with them 


rainbow colored skies 
smell of lavender in air
banana pudding on tongue


pearls of gold sunlight 
sapphire blue dripping 
golden leaves falling


trees are standing tall 
birds singing sweet music 
songs of memory filled past 


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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Sounds like the place to be...now only if there was chocolate... :) great poem -Heather

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:32:00 PM

    I'd like to go to that place too. Good one.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:00:00 PM

    So very vibrant. I like!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:35:00 PM

    sites in your heaven.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:28:00 PM

    I like the one about butterflies the best. Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:16:00 PM

    hi my sweet poetess Debbie... may i join in your feast of happiness...may i ? I do enjoyed so much each line of your lovely impressive write ...<3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:02:00 PM

    I'm enjoying the wants you share among them butterflies that flutter around you. I also like the sweet taste in your second haiku. ans the 3rd haiku, made me think of my rake. LOL~ and for the 4th haiku. It made me :-( .thank you for the sweet comment~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 10:43:00 PM

    Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by my write and leaving a comment. This write of yours is excellent, love the images they give. Hope you have a safe New Year. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 4:28:00 AM

    Debbie, I'm no authority on Haikus, I just struggle and pound my knuckles trying to determine if my poem is qualified as a haiku. I think this entry can be called a haiku..... and a damn good one at that!! Nice Job.... Love Ya, Jake

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Hi Debbie great haiku loved it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Glad to see your beautiful haiku this morning. I loved doing mine for that contest. Now I am running out of ideas for any of the other contests! These have incredible imagery. And the banana on tongue is such a unique line!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:40:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, I watch the Red Cardinals out my kitchen window for if I open the door they fly away..Someday I am going out there and just sit and see if they come and eat and drink with me out there..Thanks for stopping by..When I go out on the porch and sit, I see birds from a slight distance..They come with me there unafraid..Your review was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 9:35:00 AM

    These are so vivid...I love them. You are a great writer! Thanks for commenting on "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy." That was very sweet of you! xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:44:00 PM

    This is beautiful! I looooove butterflies and banana pudding is my fav! :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:02:00 AM

    Haiku - you too? Colorful, seasonal, very fine Haiku. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:29:00 AM

    These haikus are beautiful. Much more pleasing than my "Horsefly" poem that you read. antway, thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Have a nice day and stay warm, Jancarl

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:59:00 AM

    Descriptive, each one painting a picture for the minds eye. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Deb when I write for a contest, what I submit is colored by what I THINK the judge likes, how they themselves see the form, write the form..not all of what label haiku for a contest would I consider haiku [the breast one I would not consider haiku..it is haiku LIKE]

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/12/2012 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    let me know if you want me to critique these? I will but I want to help not upset you HUGS!
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:42:00 AM

    Love the Haiku form, and do it with much justice... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:41:00 AM

    Lovely Haiku x 4 - Debbie, well done. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:59:00 AM

    Good written!! Hugs - Laila

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:07:00 AM

    Beautiful Debbie, the last one is a bit sad.... my favorite is the first one.... I like the imagery in which you follow. Makes me want to go to them.... and the one with banana on tongue made me smile.... thank you for sharing..pd