Four in haiku by Debbie Duncan

Alfred Vassallo

Date: 4/21/2013 1:21:00 AM

Beautifully phrase, written and portrayed.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 4/7/2013 11:32:00 PM

I'd like to go to that place too. Good one.

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/12/2013 9:26:00 AM

Beautiful imagery

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/21/2013 2:01:00 AM

Thank you ;}

Jeremy Martin

Date: 2/27/2013 2:00:00 PM

So very vibrant. I like!

Debbie Duncan Date: 2/27/2013 8:20:00 PM

Thank you Jeremy ;}

The Situation

Date: 2/9/2013 3:35:00 PM

sites in your heaven.

Debbie Duncan Date: 2/16/2013 11:57:00 PM

Thanks

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/26/2013 9:28:00 PM

I like the one about butterflies the best. Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/21/2013 9:16:00 PM

hi my sweet poetess Debbie... may i join in your feast of happiness...may i ? I do enjoyed so much each line of your lovely impressive write ...<3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :)

S. K. A. T.

Date: 1/14/2013 2:02:00 PM

I'm enjoying the wants you share among them butterflies that flutter around you. I also like the sweet taste in your second haiku. ans the 3rd haiku, made me think of my rake. LOL~ and for the 4th haiku. It made me :-( .thank you for the sweet comment~SKAT

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/14/2013 9:10:00 PM

Thank you for reading ;}

Rollo West

Date: 12/29/2012 10:43:00 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by my write and leaving a comment. This write of yours is excellent, love the images they give. Hope you have a safe New Year. Rollo

John Posey

Date: 12/26/2012 4:28:00 AM

Debbie, I'm no authority on Haikus, I just struggle and pound my knuckles trying to determine if my poem is qualified as a haiku. I think this entry can be called a haiku..... and a damn good one at that!! Nice Job.... Love Ya, Jake

Owen Yeates

Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM

Hi Debbie great haiku loved it, all the best Owen

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/27/2012 11:37:00 PM

Thank you Owen ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2012 8:12:00 AM

Glad to see your beautiful haiku this morning. I loved doing mine for that contest. Now I am running out of ideas for any of the other contests! These have incredible imagery. And the banana on tongue is such a unique line!

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/26/2012 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Audrea ;} I love banana cream, or the banana nut muffins I make " a lot" ;} I've been trying to learn how to write real haiku's.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2012 4:40:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, I watch the Red Cardinals out my kitchen window for if I open the door they fly away..Someday I am going out there and just sit and see if they come and eat and drink with me out there..Thanks for stopping by..When I go out on the porch and sit, I see birds from a slight distance..They come with me there unafraid..Your review was uplifting..Sara

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/25/2012 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Sara,, Love that song " Sara Smile by Hall and Oats ;},,,, I too watch birds out my window. I have a hummingbird feeder, one came in a few years back. I've been reading up on how to write a real haiku,, thank you for reading my words ;}

HOLLY MOORE

Date: 11/20/2012 9:35:00 AM

These are so vivid...I love them. You are a great writer! Thanks for commenting on "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy." That was very sweet of you! xxoo Holly Moore

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/20/2012 10:24:00 PM

Thank you Holly,,, I enjoy reading yours as well,,,, you have a blessed Thanksgiving ;}

Anne Currin

Date: 11/19/2012 9:44:00 PM

This is beautiful! I looooove butterflies and banana pudding is my fav! :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/20/2012 2:55:00 AM

Thank you Anne,,,,, I will have to read more of yours ,,,, you have a blessed holiday ;}

daver austin

Date: 11/13/2012 10:02:00 AM

Haiku - you too? Colorful, seasonal, very fine Haiku. Love, daver

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/13/2012 4:29:00 AM

These haikus are beautiful. Much more pleasing than my "Horsefly" poem that you read. antway, thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Have a nice day and stay warm, Jancarl

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/13/2012 12:00:00 AM

‡ Just Passing Back By, Sweet Beautiful Debbie, To Say Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. I Hope You Are Doing Well And Thanks For The Com. Sweet Dreams To You. Love Always, Rachel *

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/12/2012 10:59:00 AM

Descriptive, each one painting a picture for the minds eye. Nicely done.

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Anthony,,, I"m trying to "learn" how to write them ;}

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/12/2012 6:34:00 AM

Deb when I write for a contest, what I submit is colored by what I THINK the judge likes, how they themselves see the form, write the form..not all of what label haiku for a contest would I consider haiku [the breast one I would not consider haiku..it is haiku LIKE]

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:32:00 PM

I wondered about that " breast" one being a real haiku,,,, yes do show me/ explain ;} thanks Debbie !

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/12/2012 6:35:00 AM

let me know if you want me to critique these? I will but I want to help not upset you HUGS!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/12/2012 6:16:00 AM

‡ A Masterpiece In Sensual Radiant Splendours, Sweet Beautiful Debbie. Four Extremely Beautiful Haiku's And One Would Be Hard Pressed, To Choose The Best ! I Agree With Beautiful Linda Yet Also With Your Beauty's Choise But, I Shall Just Lift Gently Its Entire Loveliness As Placing Its Radiant Beauty Atop The Mantel In Faves. Thank You For Your Kind Joyful's Visit And, Happy Holidays. My Love, Always, Rachel *

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Rachel for your always sweet words ;} I need to learn how to write a true haiku ;}

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 5:42:00 AM

Love the Haiku form, and do it with much justice... hugs Michael

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Michael,,,, I too love the haiku form,,,so I'm trying to learn to write true form ;}

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2012 2:41:00 AM

Lovely Haiku x 4 - Debbie, well done. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:50:00 PM

Thank you Anne,,,, I'm trying to learn to write a true haiku ;}

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/12/2012 1:59:00 AM

Good written!! Hugs - Laila

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Liala,,,, not sure if there're true haiku ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2012 12:07:00 AM

Beautiful Debbie, the last one is a bit sad.... my favorite is the first one.... I like the imagery in which you follow. Makes me want to go to them.... and the one with banana on tongue made me smile.... thank you for sharing..pd

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/12/2012 1:17:00 AM

Thank you Poet,,, I like the banana on tongue too ;} I tried to keep them on nature,,,, but I love the way you wrote yours ;}

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