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Beautiful Friend

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Beautiful Friend

He’s the most beautiful man I’ve ever met, but I cannot call him mine-
Why he came into my life, I guess I’ll learn in time.
In his sexiness, he says the sweetest lines and though I know that’s what they are, 
I still don’t seem to mind.
He’s honest in nature, but has no follow through, he’ll make simple promises, 
but they are not what he’ll do. 
He’ll be a dedicated initiator then stops dead in his tracks. His intentions are good,
it’s commitment that he lacks.
His gentle heart has with it a mixture of cold stone though it serves him well enough
that he’ll never be alone.
You’ll never really know him; for, he’ll always keep his distance and persistence will only
meet with silent resistance
He’s in the prime of his life doing exactly what he should, and I wouldn’t want 
to intervene, even if I could.  
So, I’ll say goodbye to romance, and welcome a new friend, hoping our discoveries will 
never truly end.

***Dedicated to JJ 11/11/12

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 2:02:00 AM
    Kim, a lovely poem, which I really like. - Have a relaxing and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Kim, wow... love the passion, and beauty you see in him, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:58:00 AM
    Enjoyed your wonderful write Kim. have a wonderful day love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:46:00 PM
    Hi Kim, What a special person, this friend, great write. Rollo