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pon the rose trellis

'pon the rose trellis last pale pink rose of summer.. roses' nectar kiss from lips of lover rose flavored kisses what bliss.. ummmm ahhh rose kisses
Written this day:November 11, 2012 Written by: Sara Kendrick

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Congratulations Sara .......Seren

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:53:00 PM

    ummmm ahhh!!! How cute! Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Sara! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Sara. Roses are beautiful and so your poem! I love it! Cheers! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:49:00 PM

    yes, I knew this would be on the list. Big congrats, sara. you deserved a win

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 3:22:00 PM

    wonderful write...congrats on your win Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Sara, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:54:00 AM

    ‡ I Didn't Think I Would Be Returning Unto The Sight Of These Beautiful Treasures Sooo Quickly, Sweet Beautiful Sara. Yet And Although I Find No Reason Which Could Be Found As An Excuse To Be Where Perfumed Fragrance Does Sooo Beautiful Bloom. I Wish To Thank Your Precious Heart For Your Kind Lovely Visit. Again, Congratulations. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Sweet and lovely. Congrats!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:30:00 AM

    ‡ Congratulations, Sweet Beautiful Sara, Upon Your Win In The Contest, LOL. I Don't Know Which One But Yesss, This Is Sooo Beautiful Its Beauty Could As Would Win, Most Every Contest, Well, Those Of Which Its Splendours Would Belong ? Truly, That Beautiful. Have A Beautiful Day In Both Love & Fragrance. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:51:00 AM

    ummmm ahhh.....Congratulations Sara on your win:)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:43:00 AM

    CONGRATS SARA ON A SULTRY ROSE HAIKU AND A STEAMY WIN TOO LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:30:00 AM

    Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:08:00 AM

    Congratulations Sara xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:20:00 PM

    Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:35:00 PM

    ‡ Its A Joy When My Heart Beholds Your Beauty And Your Beautiful Poetry, Sweet Beautiful Sara! Thank You For Your Wonderful Priceless Visit; Enchanting. Sweet Dreams To You. My Love, Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:43:00 PM

    love this romantic write, my friend

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:23:00 PM

    Hi Sara when I look for something to read that will fill my eyes with beauty I seem to come to your page, your haiku has opened my eyes and enriched my soul thankyou so much, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Genius link between 1st and 2nd haikus... Me-thinks you have mastered this form rather well...soup mail for Sara! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:30:00 AM

    The beauty of a Yellow Rose always charms me and in this wonderful Haiku you have made it intoxicating by the nectar of beloved's kiss. Great write Sara with stunning beauty of Roses and Roses resembling the softness of lips, which comes from the lovers kiss. Thank you Sara for your kind comments on my series Poem "Tesu" A Folk Love Story” With all good wishes and loves ...Ravindra...Sara K

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:19:00 PM

    You have masterfully crafted a pair of wondrous Haiku here my friend! I really enjoyed reading these two magnificent delights this evening! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Roses bring bliss

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:44:00 PM

    It's delICIOUS. hope it does well in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:31:00 PM

    Your poem is beautiful~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:15:00 PM

    ‡ Ahhh, The Bliss Of A Beautiful Kiss! Soothing Its Gentle Fragrance Caressing The Heart In Love, Sweet Beautiful Sara. My Love, 'Forever,' Rachel *