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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Yasmin. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:11:00 AM

    LOVE t h i s masterpiece - touches me deeply - Felicitations Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your 2nd place win my dear friend, Yasmin! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:55:00 PM

    Yasmin, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Just beautiful Yasmin and a well deserving win. Congrats. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:46:00 AM

    I love this, Yasmin - especially the third couplet. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 AM

    Quite a dreamwalk Yassie and the last line finished it so nicely. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Big congratulations Yasmin, knew you would be here sweet heart xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:46:00 AM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:41:00 AM

    well done Yamin ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Congrats Yasssssss on 2nd place in my Deep Dreams contest... Great job hun!!! luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:31:00 PM

    Yasmin,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:35:00 AM

    One of your best Yassssssss. !!!! Top shelf poetry from a poet who see's the rainbow in the dark. Lovely. Hugs n more Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:07:00 AM

    great write Yasmin,lovely

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Every night has its dawn.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:15:00 PM

    What a phenomenal write my friend! I was in awe of the beauty that this poem creates from within it! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and delightful poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:50:00 PM

    I like how the person below put it: beautiful fantasy is RIGHT. what a lovely one from you today, sweet lady.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Beautiful fantasy. I like "behind soft grey cotton clouds, we hide". A fun one. Love it, Yasmin. Enjoyed. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:13:00 PM

    The glow of love in this poem Yasmin, gorgeous! Have a great Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:33:00 PM

    I appreciated your use of language and imagery in this piece...I enjoyed reading it!