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My Universe

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My Universe

A universe exists
Somewhere beyond my reach
A place I wish to explore

I look to the heavens
To ask my questions
Instead I have many more


If everything is connected
Why am I separate
Just another face in the crowd

Anonymously wandering
Feeling so disconnected
With my head in the clouds


You reveal the answer
You're living within me
A Universe within my heart

Unfanthonable Love
A place of great Beauty
I desire to explore every part







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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Lovely....

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 2:58:00 AM

    Your connected here at Poetry soup :)...but i do love the concept/idea that we are all connected....You make me ponder a question that I have visited many times in my life ' what is my purpose' ...anyway, I still havent answered that question.....TY for sharing another gr8 poem Rick .....hugs Shaz

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, keep seeking and it will be revealed to you.
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

    Great write!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:42:00 PM

    The inner universe, Richard..like this very much...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2012 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Harry!
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Another splendid write from an ever so talented writer :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2012 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You flatter me! Please don't stop.
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:05:00 AM

    Wow....This is a very heartfelt write here Richard.I know what that feeling feels like.The answer comes in due time.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2012 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Dan, thanks for weighing in, I hope you are at one with the Universe who is the light and the way!
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:41:00 PM

    a universe within my heart, i love this line Richard. thx for stopping by :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your welcome, I appreciate you dropping by.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:42:00 PM

    Good job Richard; I believe that we can create our own Universe. The beauty of it is - that it is like no other. Go for it and find the beauty of yours. Many blessings. Lucilla

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:58:00 PM

    We try to reach it but ...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 8:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    But what???
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:48:00 PM

    Hi, Rick! Nice write! I like the flow/But I do not know/What is "I do not know"... Shall you allow me to write and officially post some Questionku(s?)? I like the rhythm very much! (^_^) Hanitra

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I would be honored, let me know when you have finished.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:00:00 PM

    You have written a very good poem, I like it. Have a nice Sunday afternoon Richard. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Hi Richard great pen herer I like, all the best Owen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All the best to you as well Owen
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Richard, a very nice poem,, love the way you expanded the universe within your self ... xox~pd

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is ever expanding. Thanks Linda
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:10:00 AM

    well Richard to view the universe you have to fly, so just spread your wings and off ypu go, but put a bit of spirit into it, love your poem, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What an amazing flight we will have. Thanks for reading.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Ohh, I love it, Richard. Yes, he is our Universe. It all begins with Him. Love it dearly. Awesome one. Great realization. Love ya, Toquyen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed, I made some changes so you may wish to re- read. Have a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:59:00 AM

    This is very unique theme of poem and special because it is. Great poem you penned here Richard. Hugs, Gail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Gail, we all possess the same universe but all experience it in their own way.