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In My Prime

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Below is the poem entitled In My Prime which was written by poet Sharon Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In My Prime

I stand
in my prime
indivisible
sure of my identity
but oblivious to my place in the world
you cannot change me into what you want me to be
but if you would accept me for the wonder that I already am
you may find yourself start to change into something more wonderful than us both

For SUZETTE PRIME contest – 11th November 2012

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  1. Date: 3/26/2014 4:19:00 AM

    Hallo Sharon, Please see the blog by Eileen Ghali regarding Suzette Prime poetry. I would like to have your permission to include this in my volume of poetry, TIME. Hope you are well. Love, Su

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your top spot Sharon xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:01:00 PM

    Sharon, , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... :-) PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 12/15/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We had to include a philosophical statement - it could be a quote which we expressed into our own words or expressed in the poem - as was done here. Love & Peace. Su
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/14/2012 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so we didn't need to encorporate a philisophical quote ..I guess?
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Hi Sharon It seems we both interpreted the task in a similar way. Great job, I enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:16:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS on your win in the SUZETTE PRIME contest, Sharon. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Can't believe I'm the first to comment!! Well I love how you expressed your poetic pen here. Hugs Michael