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Live Within The Box

I met this girl
Hollow through a shade of her world
Reluctant to move
A lily on hand await

For an old friend she said
The bizarre anxiety implied
Waiting within the uncertainty limits
Insecurity snatch the sparkle in her eyes

The allure of mystique
Sweeping through her mindset
Live in a simple detention
Her landscape imprisoning, but no mention

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Another wonderful piece... You are a true poet... hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael, you are the true poet too :) - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Yanny, interesting,,,..xox~pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/11/2012 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD, for visiting, and wish you a great day too :)- hug, yanny
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 2:36:00 AM

    ‡ Tis Perhaps Your Lovely Beauty's Most Impressive Verse My Eyes Have Yet To Read, Sweet Beautiful Yanny. One Can Feel The Heart As Perhaps The Compassion Expressed Admirably And Also Brilliantly. We All View Our World Through Different Lenses To Whatever Degrees In Difference ? Some May View The Entire World Itself As 'A Box.' Again I Find A Great Beauty About You. Sweet Kisses, Forever, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/11/2012 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel, I feel glad that through these simple verse it could bring a sweet breeze for you :) - hug, Yanny