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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:56:00 AM
    Started reading hurrying(but not wanting because I like the beginning so much also) towards the end.. you've got yourself a 'mountaineering poem towards the top'. Respect for the balance from the beginning towards the end. Felicitations :+) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Love the tension built up in the first five verses then the beautiful release in the last...congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Yas,,,this just has to be one of the best descriptions of a determined soul that I have read...just sprinkle a little bit of that wisdom on me...this one stands out in a category all of its own! Love ya. Ps..Sebs is doing great..Cooing a lot...sleeping 6-7 hrs at a time...catching up with his weight should see his tiny lil toes! I will send out a Christmas letter with pics in the next wk or 2. Be well, friend! gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Yasmin! love and hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place with this beauty Yasmin xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:41:00 PM
    Yasmin.... Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:33:00 AM
    lovely once again Yasmin, all the best i am sure it will do well.xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Wow Yasss you have tackled a tough form!! Excellent , bravo, wonderful!! Hugs all day Michael. Ps thank you so much for your amazing comments. xxx

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin absoulutely knockout terz here like it very much, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:21:00 AM
    This terz is loaded with such spiritual wisdom and powerful lines...the second to the last stanza is my ultimate favorite as u describe the unwavering soul...radiance like an ecclesiastical beacon...WOW! Suave! Internet back up and running, Yas! Glad to read this one on our Veteran's Day weekend! luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:34:00 PM
    Awesome poetry Yasmin, it is getting late, and I need to go get some sleep, but I am glad I stopped in to read your poem, it was well worth it, I hope you are doing fine, haven't been on the site as much, been busy with life, but I wanted to say I haven't forgotten you, always in my heart and mind, good night, xxxx Vie.

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:14:00 PM
    You have successfully completed a perfectly wonderful Terzanelle my friend! I am completely amazed by the wondrous and terrific poem you have written here Yasmin! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and outstanding poem this evening! What a delightful and fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:14:00 PM
    S-mail , Yasmin - Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 11/10/2012 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Must read your poem too .... It's a lovely poem .... love it. - Anne-Lise :)