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Taking it all in

Taking it all in

Words are often full of deception,
Only actions, shows true reflection.

Wanting ease, shaking knees,
Coward less,  for all to see.

Cravings we all must taste,
Empty tears of rivers to waste.

A glimpse of what's unforeseen,
Tell me, who will intervene?

We're in control,
Limitations we all must hold.

Standing still, we watch it fade, 
Mistakes we all have made.

Movements veering,
Outward steering.

Millions of miles from a single touch,
To realize, we've already lost so much.

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:39:00 PM

    There is a lot to soak in here, well done and enjoyable write.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Very good my friend... you are a true poet,,, Michael

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:40:00 AM

    ‡ I Viewed Your Beauty's Words Yesterday, Sweet Beautiful Manon. I Enjoyed As Was Impressed By Their Strength Etc. I Believe. Just As I Am Touched By The Depth In Reflections Amid This Touching Wonderful Verse. My Thought Small As It May Be And Or Seem Is That Yesss, Yesterday With All It Held Is Forever Gone, Tomorrow Draws Its Canvas Anew. Also, I Am One Of Those Get Out Of My Way Peter, Let Me Show You How To Walk Upon 'This Water,' LOL. Good To Read Your Lovely Heart Again. Love, Rachel *