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This Year

An interesting year it has been.... moving back to India after two decades Now, living in the most happening place in Mumbai Rock concerts, musical shows, tinsel town dramatics The histrionics, capricious paparazzi, advertising, media hub Thankfully, I remain unfazed.. Living in an apartment in a skyscrapper Seeing the glorious sun rising Saying goodbye to the day as the sun sets Welcoming the smiling moon Honestly, I can say, most of the time My head is in the clouds... The night sky mostly clear..the stars seem so close twinkling, blinking, inviting... At dawn, as I open my window to Let in the early morning light The fog sways in gently..the dew Sparkles on the flowers in my balcony garden. And most of all, I am proud that I have overcome my fear of driving in The chaotic mumbai traffic, where drivers Couldn't care less about signals and driving etiquettes Horns keep blasting away continuously Its manipulation of the worst kind...disastrous, fatal sometimes And I have learnt, am learning nicely without gritting my teeth There have been no skirmishes or accidents so far Touchwood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'd like to wind up by saying Yes, I think I have written some good poetry this year What say you, folks???????? For Carol Brown

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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Yasmin, glad this year meant lots to you... i'm also glad you over came some fears... sun rising and setting,,, good way to describe the year...love your win...pd

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Opening a large bottle of bubbly for this outstanding win!! Yeah!! Hugs sista! gwendolen....ps,,,I am with Debs....get that book written!!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:47:00 PM

    yes, yes, you have written some GREAT poems, dear friend!! Like this one here. Gosh, I wish I had not missed doing this challenge. It just got away from me. But BIG congrats to you on your well deserved win. luv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:06:00 PM

    I say it's time to put togther a small BOOK! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:24:00 AM

    Well, that's great Yasmin! Congratulations for a super win! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 11:39:00 PM

    Well yes, if this is a sample. Brought you a number one. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Congrats on the top win, Yas!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:15:00 PM

    CONGRATS YASMIN ON A PRECIOUS WRITE AND SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Congrats on your well deserved win in the Carol Brown's Contest. You are enjoying Bombay that is great. I wish you well. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:11:00 PM

    Well done, another contest that passed me by I'm glad it didn't pass you by though xx

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest Yasmin. Thank you for supporting this contest and may you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:20:00 AM

    A hearty congrats for learning how to navigate thru some very treacherous driving conditions, Yas. Unbelievable!!..and I am so proud of your resiliency to relocate your family after being in one spot for 2 decades...You are a very tough cookie! :) Nice poem!! love, gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:17:00 PM

    I say we've all written some good poems this year, and probably some bad ones too, but hey, that's art imitating life :) an interesting peek into your world, yasmin - love "fog sways", unusual verb choice

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Sounds like you moved to New York City!!! So happy you are where you should be.. hug n luv your way Yassssssssss!!! from Me

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Yes, you have written some of the most exquisite poetry that I've ever read my friend, I have really enjoyed reading them this year! This poem is exactly what Carol is looking for I believe when she created this contest, what a delightful piece this one truly is Yasmin, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 7:35:00 AM

    This one sure is a beauty! You've have brought this scene to life before my eyes. Very well done. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:38:00 AM

    I say you just did if you haven't done it already. Love it. What a beautiful apartment view. Love skyscraper. Enjoyed the view. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:25:00 AM

    I say most definitely "YES"... and 2013 will be no different! Love and big hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:09:00 AM

    You ave beautifully described yourself and Mumbai here hun. I love it so. Yas do send me your mobile no. I'd love to talk to you. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Many good poems and an exciting year 2012, Yasmin! Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)