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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Yasmin, glad this year meant lots to you... i'm also glad you over came some fears... sun rising and setting,,, good way to describe the year...love your win...pd

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Opening a large bottle of bubbly for this outstanding win!! Yeah!! Hugs sista! gwendolen....ps,,,I am with Debs....get that book written!!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:47:00 PM

    yes, yes, you have written some GREAT poems, dear friend!! Like this one here. Gosh, I wish I had not missed doing this challenge. It just got away from me. But BIG congrats to you on your well deserved win. luv, andrea

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:06:00 PM

    I say it's time to put togther a small BOOK! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:24:00 AM

    Well, that's great Yasmin! Congratulations for a super win! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 11:39:00 PM

    Well yes, if this is a sample. Brought you a number one. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Congrats on the top win, Yas!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:15:00 PM

    CONGRATS YASMIN ON A PRECIOUS WRITE AND SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Congrats on your well deserved win in the Carol Brown's Contest. You are enjoying Bombay that is great. I wish you well. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:11:00 PM

    Well done, another contest that passed me by I'm glad it didn't pass you by though xx

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest Yasmin. Thank you for supporting this contest and may you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:20:00 AM

    A hearty congrats for learning how to navigate thru some very treacherous driving conditions, Yas. Unbelievable!!..and I am so proud of your resiliency to relocate your family after being in one spot for 2 decades...You are a very tough cookie! :) Nice poem!! love, gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:17:00 PM

    I say we've all written some good poems this year, and probably some bad ones too, but hey, that's art imitating life :) an interesting peek into your world, yasmin - love "fog sways", unusual verb choice

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Sounds like you moved to New York City!!! So happy you are where you should be.. hug n luv your way Yassssssssss!!! from Me

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Yes, you have written some of the most exquisite poetry that I've ever read my friend, I have really enjoyed reading them this year! This poem is exactly what Carol is looking for I believe when she created this contest, what a delightful piece this one truly is Yasmin, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 7:35:00 AM

    This one sure is a beauty! You've have brought this scene to life before my eyes. Very well done. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:38:00 AM

    I say you just did if you haven't done it already. Love it. What a beautiful apartment view. Love skyscraper. Enjoyed the view. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:25:00 AM

    I say most definitely "YES"... and 2013 will be no different! Love and big hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:09:00 AM

    You ave beautifully described yourself and Mumbai here hun. I love it so. Yas do send me your mobile no. I'd love to talk to you. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Many good poems and an exciting year 2012, Yasmin! Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)