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A Hallowed Kiss on Halloween

Theres a thinning between the realms this night.A time and place for souls to cross the Great Divide of Life and Death.If mine broke free and chanced to pass Your way,would You feed on it,feel the need of it as You took My breath away?Would You fill Me with Your own in kind?The one I hunger for.While I felt Myself fall forward fastly and everlasting as our tounges fought playfully and passed it ba
ck and forth.Would You give Me Yours to keep in place where Mine once was , so as to keep it safe?Theres a thinning where I lose Myself.Felt free and bold as I shiver from Your lips on Mine.No thought of anything but the moments cold , as this kiss which freezes time.As I would hold You on this Halloween.I would hold You Hallowed For Now and Evermore.Cleaved to Body,Heart and Soul.I hold this Moment in This Kiss We Shared This Very Night. A Hallowed Kiss on Halloween by James Patrick Kail Wednesday October 31 2012

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:31:00 PM

    lover boy lol,great write James,enjoyed

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:55:00 AM

    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Jamesp. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:51:00 AM

    ‡ Wow, Someone Is In Love. I Saw The Title With 'Halloween,' Thus I Had To Drop In Since I Love Its Joyful Day, My Dear Sweet James. Let It Be. Hugs, Rachel *

    kail Avatar jamesp kail Date: 12/1/2012 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Muse returned to Me.I will keep You aprosed of the situation. ;)p
    kail Avatar jamesp kail Date: 11/12/2012 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the next day wasnt nearly as good