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A Welcome For Timorous Tim

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A Welcome For Timorous Tim

Poor Tim, the timorous, one cold dark day set out to prove that TIMID he was not! He ventured one whole night alone to stay inside the empty house his friends had sought. The house was old. . . unlocked, it beckoned Tim. He neared its door; his trepidation grew. His laughing friends grew silent watching him. He deeply breathed, then vanished from their view. Inside, Tim heard below the house a sound. He could not be a coward! With a sigh, he took the creaking stairway down and found before his eyes, a scraggly toothless guy who greeted, smilingly, the trembling lad: “It ain’t the Ritz, but welcome to my pad!” For the "Smile You're On Candid Camera Contest of vienna bombardieri

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 1:01:00 AM

    Is it shallow of me to click on this simply because my name was written all over it?? Lol... Well either way it was a nice lighthearted read... I for someone reason pictured the toothless old man to have a kindly British accent... Not sure why!

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/20/2013 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahaha
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this "Candid Camera" contest Andrea. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:44:00 AM

    My big congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Andrea! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:56:00 PM

    Andrea, congrats with your awesome poem ..always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Very enjoyable read... Congratulations on the win!

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Ha hahahah....love that ending line!!! Very very cool! Congrats Andrea! This story could continue on ya know?...hahah

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:13:00 AM

    Very clever Andrea, got to continue (I want more!) LOL--Congrats

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:09:00 AM

    You twisted your way to victory, well done.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Congratulations my friend Andrea on you win. Cheers!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:07:00 AM

    Love the finsih here Andy congratulations girl xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Had me wondering but love the end of this poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:31:00 AM

    I'm way behind - had a couple of miserable days and the e-mail piled up. I hope that kid had a clothespin on his nose. Got a chuckle out of this one. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Didn't know where this was leading me but am happy with the ending. Nice there's a place for the old guy. Neat entry Andrea, all the best! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Sounds like you had fun writing this one. Good luck.

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:45:00 PM

    lol....nice write Andrea...thanks for stopping by....hugs

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 2:16:00 PM

    The guy couldn't have been a vampire - he had no teeth. A great twist ending, dear Andrea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:36:00 AM

    A nice picture of imagination. Good luck always and loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:19:00 AM

    Lol, I'll be smiling before sleeping tonight my friend for this beautiful poem of yours! I love it! Again, thank you so much for stopping by and your wonderful comments. Good night! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:46:00 AM

    A nice fantasy poem here. Best of luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:47:00 AM

    I like this poem of yours friend sunflower girl Andrea (^_^)... a sure winner for me :) like the twist... thanks always for your nice comments on my poems. Love, Maria

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:50:00 PM

    Not the ending I expected, nice twist.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:34:00 PM

    Lol, it ain't the Ritz, alright. Scared poor old Tim. I like "scraggly, toothless guy" that you described. I can just see him standing there grinning at our timorous Tim. Like it. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:54:00 PM

    Oooow scary

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:14:00 PM

    this one was too cute...love the way it ended, good luck in the contest! Enjoyed reading your poem!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Hi Andrea' poor, Tim , why would he want to prove and set out for a ventured night' A home is a home. And I sure like the ending. Fits the contest well I agree with others. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:41:00 AM

    A real hoot reading about Tim Andrea, wishing you a top win with this one.."

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:00:00 AM

    I'm not seeing your sexy haiku... Hummm..maybe not your take... LOL...It is okay... I think this contest is breaking all the rules.. Something you know nothing about... ha ha ha... Anyways~ I have to check this contest out.. I never do good in contest.. Sometimes I think my thinking is way out of the box for these simple poets.. he he he... love this verse.. Good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:46:00 AM

    See ,I told you you can write about anything in Sonnet form.This is another example of that.Enjoyed the humour very much Andrea.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:16:00 PM

    Lol,there she`s back again! That witty and fun Andrea.Great one! Hope you`re well and keeping up that positive spirit I love so much:) Have a splendid weekend over there,and take care! Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:58:00 PM

    just love this Andrea, you also not posting alot lately, hope Joe can get a job, and hope you are ok. if time i'll check out an oldie of yours...

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